Here's some of our top sentences...
Josh L - The wind is blowing in gusts around the high turrets of the castle.
Dominic - The castle is shining like gold in a treasure chest.
Ellie - The dark, roaring waterfalls storm down the rocks.
Lily - The glowing lanterns are making the walls glow golden.
Jessie T - Red, shiny turrets point all the way to the dark sky, so you can't see the top.
Joe - There is a moat full of fresh, bitter water.
Paige - The soldier's tents are colourful like a rainbow in the bright, blue sky.
Ryan - In the glistening blue sky the birds chirp in the distance on the turrets.
Gracie - Everything is dark and a storm is.approaching. You are really small next to the tall castle.
Bonnie - The castle is towering over you like a blossoming tree.
Bethany - The fluffy, white clouds are in the sparkling sky.
Alex S - Through the arch is the marvellous church with an ancient statue and roasting fire.
Jessica W - The dusty walls are like rusty metal. Turrets are reaching up into the dark, stormy sky.
Honey - A golden coloured sun waking up in the morning, but as soon as possible the stormy, grey clouds as fluffy as cotton wool fly in above the village.
Tyler - The tree's shadows getting bigger and then smaller in the sunlight.
Liam - The hot crackle of the fire and the juicy hog roast of the mead hall.
Eva - The old, filthy burning fire glowing next to the scary shadows of the castle.
Josh S - Ivy is creeping up on the dark, gloomy walls of the castle gardens.
Rebecca - The gigantic castle is very ancient, but marvellous. It's an amazing castle to look at, yet it could fall easily.
Harrison - The lofty castle walls are stretching up to the glimmering, glowing stratosphere.
Leah - The market has a lovely smell of fragrant fruits: apple and melon, lime, grape and yummy lemons.
Daniel - The ancient waterfall, falling like a jet, thundering past the colossal, handsome castle.
Zane - The grey, slimy, terrifying walls are part of the gleaming castle. Under the castle, an ancient waterfall is flowing down.
Robbie - The turrets overlooking everyone in the town hiding and arching against the invaders.
Which is your favourite sentence? Can you think of any more? Leave a comment with one in it!
Wow Beech class these are AMAZING descriptive sentences! I can't wait to do some story writing with you next week!
ReplyDeleteWOW! I think they are amazing.
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